I think that each chapter jump a little without putting out the story between the gaps, that is a lil pity bcs it would be nice to have some pages to show the initial action on it And another thing is the quality of the writting, even if its meeh, it still bothers how the author jumps over some plots for pure sack of not doing. Like the Ice Wolf not ve been show before, the Acestors of the Palace not being show reacting to a new prodigy and etc.
Your_Latino_MF_69
I think that each chapter jump a little without putting out the story between the gaps, that is a lil pity bcs it would be nice to have some pages to show the initial action on it
And another thing is the quality of the writting, even if its meeh, it still bothers how the author jumps over some plots for pure sack of not doing. Like the Ice Wolf not ve been show before, the Acestors of the Palace not being show reacting to a new prodigy and etc.