First thoughts: Translations and grammar are pretty bad. Font also makes it look like amateur work. The storyline seems alright so far. Nothing that really hooks the reader besides the basic introduction of the MC but maybe it gets better as you read more.
Sensasian
First thoughts:
Translations and grammar are pretty bad.
Font also makes it look like amateur work.
The storyline seems alright so far. Nothing that really hooks the reader besides the basic introduction of the MC but maybe it gets better as you read more.
Hopefully the translation quality gets better.